Autumn...it have arrived
The trees are deep in a slumber...
And the park benches...all alone...
Yesterdays colorful sunset is now tomorrows hope
People have put on a heavy face; Or is it the heavy dress...
Long cots, mufflers, caps...
Yesterday we were friends; But now heavy silences have fallen between us...
And I begin to wonder ”is life only a rat race?"
If only we don’t have deadlines...
Or, is the hustle and rush our own way to protect our life
From understanding the truth - that our life cannot be complete...
Am not sure...
Retrospection - should I examine my mind? Or should I examine my life???
Am confused...and am restless...
A faceless stranger, I am to myself...
17 comments:
nicely written.... but just one comment....
AUTUMN?!! WHERE IS THE BLOODY AUTUMN????? KEEPS RAINING ALL THE TIME IN THIS MISERABLE AND GODFORSAKEN CITY... HMPH
okay, that was too loud a vent... just pissed with the rains :(
but trust me dude, a hopeless romantic like us will enjoy this season a lot! (without the rains tho)
lovely post!
very well written..
nice to see romantic stuff like this on a guy's blog.. especially a biker's?
are u for real?? :)
Yesterdays colorful sunset is now tomorrows hope - the best line out of it.. beautifuly written :)
@ LJ - are yaar, chillao math. just remove the helmet and enzooy the thanda thanda barish :) and no, i am not a hopeless romantic, i am a romantic with hope ;-)
@akila - as real as they comes :) Biker, romantic, and lot more :)
@ lena - thnx :)
"Yesterdays colorful sunset is now tomorrows hope" - Lovely lines
"I am to myself" - Reminds me of the line in a tamil song "nee mattum dhan indha ulagatile unaku thunai ..." Meaning "The only company for u in this world in U".
Nice post Anoop.
hey....
jus stumbled upon ur blog. nice poem! I esply love dthe last line. keep writing :)
@ kuttibalu - yup- athu thaan unmayi.intha ulagathil unakku nee mattum thaan thunai. :)
@pointblank - welcome :) do keep visiting.
poetry. damn. sorry, i'm VERY bad with poems.....
nicely written...bikers and redneck truckers as poets..who da thought....
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Nice poem! You don't like autumn very much, I take it? I don't much either...but I love the winter...and songs about snow...and everything red and green. I'm a sucker for things like that. But perhaps there's not such a pervasive holiday spirit in Bangalore? That's the best thing about winter.
What mind says, life goes on isn't it.
a confused soul is one that seeks to grow and seek better options.....so you dont need to examine your mind or life - examine options that will take you out of this confusion...
found you link from another blog :)
is it really autumn as in the season you are talking abt or teh hints are strongly towards teh autmn that everyone experience in their lives??
beautiful work nevertheless!!!
@Mystique: he he, no probs. me too very bad with Poems :)
@Robert: yup... but it happened :)
@Shalini: Sure, will do it soon
@Rajani: oops - actually, i like autumn very much. but then, i like winter, summer and spring too :)
@Priya: thatz true
@Ceedy: welcome to my space. :)
@sam: welcome to my space :) the lines are about both - the humun minds autum concided with the autumn season :)
My fav season..Autumn..its jus awesome...Wat do u say???
@ aarthi: agree with you - autumn is awsome :)
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