strands of music
slight drizzle of a forlorn rain
i sat there enjoying getting lost
spring will come, summer and then winter
and flowers will bloom
but who knows where we will be...
the slow blue fire of moonlight sky
burns my mind, a throbbing deep pain
plays peak a boo with me
yesterdays,
the land of lost opportunities
the shambles of broken dreams
of lost time and bleak hopes
try to weigh me down
the uncut beats of my heart
the warmth of my unborn dreams
the unlit flame of passion
I hear a faint crescendo of rising
of new tomorrows
of new fertile land of hopes
the rain beats itz rhythm
on the window sill
and i sat there with an empty glass
and an empty mind
trying to find my way
through the maze called mind....
(PS: The I in this scribbling is not me, nor do he reflect my state.)
13 comments:
the warmth of my unborn dreams
the unlit flame of passion
-Enjoyed these lines Xh. Lovely..
Found it so cute that you hastened to clarify that its not you! :-)
This could make a nice song.
BTW I have send you a message on facebook--pls check :-)
Pah, ace photographer AND songwriter!
You have so many career paths to choose, I'm jealous :P
veen if it is not you /or your state.. I always wanted to say this to "HE"
--Fill yur glass with hope dear... thats the only thing real and understandable...that helps us stay connected with sanity :)
and as for you.. u knw what yu r such a awesome writer.. :)
i hope my comment does justice to yur post :)
why did u have to give the PS...:P
where we will be....havent u mentioned dreamlike states, I am in a trance already...:)
Yeh bechara tanhai ke boj ka mara
Ise chayeye zindagi me koi sahara :)
Loved it - write more like these
ooohh...poetry..!(or is it a song..?) admirable totally! i cn never go beyond rhymin words when i try to write anythin like tat ;) hehe...
keep it comin :)
@priya: thnx :)
@ps: thnx :) for the comment and ofr teh message...
@coconut: he he he
@veenz: agree with ya :)but am sure u hv l'll overdone with ur prise :P
@d_s: coz i am not the guy in the scribble :)
@ceedy: thnx da
@preeti: itz actually somethin i scribbled :) nice toknow that u enjoyed it...
Beautiful lines aNoop.
//the warmth of my unborn dreams
the unlit flame of passion// - Awesome one..
hey
i am new in the world of blogging
i liked your article
specially the title or yaeh the NAME.
go ahead give it sweet tune you are going to rawk the town
keep i n touch
Are you a genuius by chance or by birth itself?? :)
you are amazing yaar i admire your skills .. really good
loved the lines
the warmth of my unborn dreams
the unlit flame of passion
hmmkeep rocking as u do
@kb: thnx da machi
@suvaiba: welcome to my blog :)
@meenu: man, u r lavising in ur praises... am just anoterh guy out there.. though a l'll bit different ;-D
the uncut beats of my heart
the warmth of my unborn dreams
the unlit flame of passion
I hear a faint crescendo of rising
of new tomorrows
of new fertile land of hopes
my fav!!!
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