Friday, April 11, 2008

silverlight

...i looked deep into those eyes
the bottom less ocean of emotions
i felt lost to the magic
and they swept my feet of the ground
come to me, they whispered
and they filled my vacuum
with a silver light....


(--fRm the wrkshop of the eXperthAnd--)

20 comments:

Cinderella. said...

**...and filled my vaccum with a silver light...**

Loved this part !

Lena said...

so beautiful that i cant find words to express it..

abinash said...

Great da. A lovely insight. Loved it.... And hey I didnt tell you. Actually I called u today for that. I bought a Bullet Electra, 5 speed. :)

Suma said...

love is in the air...
;)

was it the light of another mobike?:)

Kuttibalu said...

speechless dude.. beautiful lines machi..

Gazal said...

hmmm
was about to ask the same...is the glare of another motorbike???

lol
and whats the workshop??

PREETI said...

Ah! is this for who i think it is??? ;)

--xh-- said...

@cindy: :) thnx
@Lena: :)
@abhi: :) thnx da. congratz on the bull. do call me soon.
@suma: :) he he - not really. and this time - no, it was not amo-bike. just a piece of imagination...
@KB: thnx da :)
@Gazal: he he - imagination @ wrk. and the wRkshop - itz where i give shapes to my imagination ;)
@preetz: no, itz not ;-D

Meenu said...

Really good ! :)
silver light ??:D

enjoy !
have a great Vishu !

priya said...

Lovely lines. A good break leads to nice romantic lines XH isn't it.

vEENs said...

ummm!!!

darn...u can sound romantic wen u write at least :-/

we have hope here :D

Mez said...

Nice!

c e e d y said...

ohohoh

did you use vacuum cleaner on your thermometer ;)

NICE!!!!!

gunj said...

d pyarz hogayaz??
:P

Meghna said...

Hi Bog Bro,
Awesome! SO much depth and feeling....lovely :P

Aarthi said...

Awesome...Short and sweet ...the best way to convey...:)

--xh-- said...

@meenu: thnx da. u too hv a great vishu
@priya: he he - tried tweaking my romantic juices...
@veenz: whn I write atleast? :P how dare you??? he he he
@mez: :)
@ceedy: ha ha ha - it just happened da
@gunj: nahi re - just a piece of imagination
@meghz: thnx, l'll sis.
@aarthi: :) thnx da

Anjuli said...

nice :)

Pointblank said...

lovely lines!!!

So biker turned lover (ahem!) , who eyes did u say were those??? Lemme c, If i can work out a tag to expoase the source of the silver light ;)

Juby George said...

silver light and emotions.... grr.... is there more to come...